A poem written by my 14 year old daughter.
One Stand
When I looked at that glass, I looked at its point,
& started to think, “Is he really going to cut off my body joints?”
As I go to reach for that door,
I find out I can’t, I’m shackled to the floor.
As I begin to prepare to die,
I think of my life & try not to cry.
While I sit on that floor which is made of sand,
I look out my tiny window & begin to stand.
Now I realize, I’m in Gods hands,
to help me with my troubles, in which he banned.
So I lay on that floor,
hoping the pain will be no more.
I quietly fell asleep on that dirt-sandy floor,
& find myself somewhere warm, but it’s not a college dorm.
But where I am at is in the warmth of my parents arms,
holding me tightly with such charm.
My abductor was sent to jail
& he will not receive bail.
A few weeks have past & I’m with my whole family,
to see the lastest news on our T.V.
My abductor was so mad you could see he was in a Rage,
in such a rage that he made the front page.
So as we saw the case come to a close we are all happy to shout with glee,
because now I’m home……….where I’m suppose to be!!!!!
Everytime I read this it raises a lot of mixed emotions, but think it’s very much worthy of sharing. She has it posted on her blog, but hasn’t had the time lately to keep it updated, I’d guess once school starts again time will settle down and she may get around to some more serious writing.
August 4th, 2005 at 2:49 pm
Wow, that froma 14 yr old? My first thought it was made a 14 yr old write that… hopefully nothing bad.
August 4th, 2005 at 3:00 pm
She had written that for some class or another…. unfortunately there was a catalyst to it, but nothing near as dark as she depicted.
August 4th, 2005 at 3:03 pm
She has got talent.
Reminds me of myself when I was 13.
The lines on the abductor in rage?
There was the news report about an 11 year old girl who nagged her kidnapper until he let her go.
Is this on the same case or it’s just coincidental?
August 4th, 2005 at 3:13 pm
I’m not familiar with the report you are talking about… but rest assured she was not kidnapped or anything like that. She wrote this last spring, must be just a coincidence, though any would-be kidnapper would really be in some serious dutch if he targetted my little girl..
August 5th, 2005 at 1:40 am
Powerful poem…It really shocked me when the “abducted” thing was mentioned… I hope she writes some more happy poems though.